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IELTS Writing Task 1 · Line Graph

Biểu đồ đường: template, từ vựng xu hướng, 10 cấu trúc câu, bài mẫu và 10 outline luyện viết
Line graphs: template, trend vocabulary, sentence structures, models and 10 practice outlines
Template 4 đoạn60+ từ & cụm từ10 cấu trúc30 câu tự chấm10 outlineChấm chữa tự động

Line Graph là gì? · What is a line graph?

Mô tả sự thay đổi theo thời gian. Trọng tâm: xu hướng tổng thể, giá trị đầu – cuối, đỉnh – đáy, dao động, giao nhau.
It shows change over time: overall trends, start and end values, peaks and lows, fluctuations and crossing points.

Các biến thể · Variants

Biến thểChiến lược chia BodyLuyện ở
1 đường, nhiều mốc · 1 lineChia Body theo giai đoạn (vd. tăng đến 2010 / giảm sau 2010)Outline 1
2–4 đường, xu hướng khác nhauBody 1: nhóm tăng · Body 2: nhóm giảm / ổn địnhOutline 2, 4, 5, 7
Nhiều đường (5+)Gộp các đường có hành vi giống nhau; chỉ nêu số của đường tiêu biểuOutline 8
Có điểm giao nhau · CrossingNêu rõ năm đảo chiều: A overtook B in 2015Outline 2, 5, 7, 10
Có dữ liệu dự báo · ProjectionQuá khứ: past simple · Tương lai: is projected / expected toOutline 9, 10

Quy trình T-O-G-D trong 3 phút · 3-minute analysis

  1. T – Type & Tense: 1 đường hay nhiều đường? Có dự báo không? → chọn thì.
  2. O – Overview: tìm 2 đặc điểm lớn nhất: xu hướng chung + cao nhất / thay đổi lớn nhất / điểm giao.
  3. G – Group: chia 2 nhóm cho Body 1 và Body 2 (theo xu hướng, theo nhóm mức độ, hoặc theo giai đoạn).
  4. D – Data: khoanh số liệu đầu – cuối – đỉnh – đáy – điểm giao. Không mô tả từng năm.

Lỗi cần tránh · Common mistakes

✗ Dùng fluctuate cho đường chỉ tăng · ✗ Dùng plummet cho mức giảm nhỏ · ✗ Mô tả từng năm một · ✗ Quên đơn vị (million, %, tonnes) · ✗ Viết % thay cho percentage points · ✗ Đưa ý kiến hoặc đoán nguyên nhân · ✗ Không có Overview.
Teacher note: Hoạt động “Draw the line”: giáo viên đọc 3 câu mô tả, học viên vẽ lại đường. Kiểm tra độ chính xác của mức độ (slightly vs sharply).

Template chuẩn 4 đoạn · Standard template

160–190 từ · 20 phút. Mỗi đoạn có nhiệm vụ riêng.
Four paragraphs, each with one clear job.

ĐoạnĐộ dàiNhiệm vụ
1. Introduction20–30 từParaphrase đề: loại biểu đồ + WHAT + WHERE + WHEN
2. Overview30–45 từ2 câu khái quát: xu hướng chung + đặc điểm nổi bật. Không số liệu chi tiết
3. Body 150–60 từNhóm 1: số liệu đầu – cuối – đỉnh – đáy, có so sánh
4. Body 250–60 từNhóm 2: tương tự, dùng từ nối tương phản / tương đồng

Khung bài điền chỗ trống · Fill-in template

Intro. The line graph illustrates [changes in / the number of …] [in place] between [Y1] and [Y2].

Overview. Overall, [A and B] saw an upward trend, whereas [C] declined over the period. It is also noticeable that [A] overtook [B] to become the highest by [year] / [C] remained the lowest throughout.

Body 1. In [Y1], [A] stood at [X], compared with [Y] for [B]. Over the following [n] years, this figure rose [steadily] to [X], before peaking at [X] in [year]. [B] followed a similar pattern, increasing from [X] to [Y].

Body 2. By contrast, [C] began at [X] and fell [gradually] to [Y] by [year]. [D], meanwhile, fluctuated between [X] and [Y], finishing the period at [Z].

Khung câu theo đoạn · Sentence frames

ĐoạnKhung câu
IntroThe line graph illustrates / compares / shows changes in [subject] in [place] between [year] and [year].
OverviewOverall, [A] increased considerably, whereas [B] declined, and [C] remained relatively stable. [A] overtook [B] to become the highest by the end of the period.
Body 1[A] rose from [X] in [year] to [Y] in [year], while [B] experienced a more modest increase.
Body 2In contrast, [C] fell steadily, reaching a low of [X] in [year].
Dự báo[A] is projected / expected / predicted to reach [X] by [year].

Paraphrase Intro nhanh · Quick intro paraphrasing

Đề gốcDiễn đạt lại · Paraphrase
showsillustrates · compares · gives information about · depicts
the number ofhow many … · the figure for · the quantity of
the percentage ofthe proportion of · the share of · what percentage of
in one countryin a particular country · in a certain nation
between 2000 and 2020from 2000 to 2020 · over the 20-year period from 2000 to 2020 · over two decades

Từ vựng mô tả xu hướng · Trend vocabulary

Hai cách viết: Động từ + trạng từ hoặc Tính từ + danh từ.
Verb + adverb, or adjective + noun.

1. Language bank

Ý nghĩa · MeaningĐộng từ · VerbDanh từ · Noun phrase
Tăng · Riserise, increase, grow, climba rise / an increase / growth in
Tăng mạnh · Rise sharplysurge, soar, rocketa surge in, a dramatic increase in
Giảm · Fallfall, decline, decrease, dropa fall / a decline in
Giảm mạnh · Fall sharplyplummet, plungea sharp drop in
Ổn định · Stay the sameremain stable / unchanged, stay constanta period of stability
Chững lại · Stop changinglevel off, plateaua plateau at
Dao động · Go up and downfluctuate (between X and Y)fluctuations
Đạt đỉnh / chạm đáypeak at, reach a low of, bottom out ata peak of, a low of
Phục hồi · Recoverrecover, rebounda recovery
Vượt qua · Overtakeovertake, surpass, exceed—
Bằng nhau · Equaldraw level with, reach the same level as—

2. Mức độ thay đổi · Degree of change

Mức độTrạng từ · AdverbTính từ · Adjective
Rất mạnh · very largedramatically, sharply, rapidly, steeplydramatic, sharp, rapid, steep
Đáng kể · largesignificantly, considerably, substantially, markedlysignificant, considerable, substantial, marked
Vừa, đều · moderate / steadymoderately, steadily, graduallymoderate, steady, gradual
Nhẹ · smallslightly, marginally, modestlyslight, marginal, modest
Mẹo: Mức độ phải khớp số liệu. 72% → 25% là significantly; 51% → 50% là slightly. Đừng dùng plummet cho mức giảm nhỏ.

3. Giới từ với số liệu · Prepositions

Cấu trúcNghĩaVí dụ
from X to Ygiá trị đầu và cuốirose from 20% to 50%
by Xlượng thay đổirose by 30 percentage points
an increase of Xmức tăngan increase of 30 units
stand at / at Xgiá trị tại một thời điểmstood at 40% in 2010
peak at / reach a peak ofđỉnhpeaked at 80%
between X and Ydao độngfluctuated between 10 and 15

4. Ước lượng · Approximation

approximately / about / aroundroughlyjust over / just undernearly / almostwell over / well belowa little more than

5. So sánh · Comparison

Cấu trúcVí dụ
whereas / whileA increased steadily, whereas B declined.
compared withThe figure stood at 40%, compared with 25% for B.
that of / those ofThe population of Tokyo was larger than that of Paris.
respectivelyA and B recorded 30% and 45%, respectively.
twice / three times as … asA was twice as high as B.
-folda threefold increase
the + superlativeThe highest figure was recorded in 2020.

6. Chủ ngữ học thuật – tránh lặp · Academic subjects

the figure forthe number ofthe amount ofthe proportion ofthe percentage ofthe rate ofconsumption / production / expenditure

7. Từ nối · Linking words

Chức năngTừ nối
OverviewOverall, In general, It is clear that
Tương phản · ContrastBy contrast, In contrast, However, Meanwhile, On the other hand
Tương đồng · SimilaritySimilarly, Likewise, A similar pattern was seen in
Thời gian · TimeOver the period, Thereafter, Subsequently, By the end of the period
Dự báo · Futureis projected to, is expected to, is predicted to, is set to … by 2040

8. Collocations

a steady risea sharp increasea gradual declinea slight dipa marked fallan upward / downward trendreach a peak ofhit a low oflevel off atremain broadly stablefluctuate considerablyrecover slightlynarrow / widen the gapover the period shownby the end of the periodthroughout the period

Teacher note: Cho học viên chuyển mỗi dòng Language bank thành 2 câu (Verb + adverb ↔ There was + adj + noun) trước khi làm Phần C ở tab Luyện tập.

10 cấu trúc câu mô tả xu hướng · 10 trend structures

Đổi cấu trúc giữa các câu để tăng điểm GRA và tránh lặp.
Vary your structures to raise your Grammar score.

#Cấu trúc · StructureVí dụ · ExampleBand
1S + V + adv + from X (in Y1) to Z (in Y2)Car sales rose steadily from 2 million in 2000 to 5 million in 2020.5.0+
2There was a/an + adj + noun + in + SThere was a dramatic increase in online sales.5.0+
3S + experienced / saw / witnessed + adj + nounJapan experienced a gradual decline in its birth rate.5.5+
4[Time] + saw / witnessed + noun + in + SThe following decade saw a sharp fall in coal use.6.0+
5After reaching a peak of X in Y, S + VAfter reaching a peak of 70% in 2012, the rate declined.6.5+
6S + V …, before + V-ing …The figure climbed to 40%, before levelling off.6.5+
7S + V …, reaching / ending at XExports grew rapidly, reaching $9 billion in 2019.6.5+
8While A + V, B + VWhile gas use rose, oil consumption halved.6.0+
9A overtook B in Y and remained ahead thereafterSpain overtook France in 2015 and remained ahead thereafter.6.5+
10S + is projected / expected to + V + X by YThe figure is projected to reach 35% by 2040.6.0+

Câu Band 7+ · Band 7+ sentences

The figure for A increased steadily from 20% to 50%, before levelling off.

After reaching a peak of 70% in 2012, the proportion declined gradually.

A overtook B in 2015 and remained ahead for the rest of the period.

While A followed an upward trend, B experienced an overall decline.

There was a threefold increase in …, from 2 million to 6 million.

Thực hành nhanh: viết lại câu · Quick rewrite

Viết lại câu theo cấu trúc trong ngoặc, rồi bấm Kiểm tra.

Bài mẫu Band 6.0 – 9.0 · Model answers

Cùng một đề, bốn mức band. So sánh để thấy điều gì nâng band.
One task, four bands: see what lifts the score.

Đề: The line graph below shows the percentage of people using the Internet in three countries, A, B and C, between 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Band 6.0 · B2

The line graph shows the percentage of people who use the Internet in three countries from 2000 to 2020. Overall, Country A increased and Country B decreased, while Country C was quite stable.

In 2000, the percentage of Internet users in Country A was 20%, which was the lowest. In 2010 it increased to 40% and in 2020 it increased to 70%. This was the highest number in 2020.

Country B was 60% in 2000, which was the highest of the three countries. In 2010 it decreased to 55% and then it decreased again to 40% in 2020. Country C had 30% in 2000. It increase a little to 35% in 2010 and then it stayed the same until 2020.

In conclusion, Country A had the biggest change and Country B had a decrease, but Country C did not change very much.

≈ 155 words
TA 6: có Overview nhưng sơ sài; mô tả theo năm, máy móc. CC 6: lặp “it increased / it decreased”; “In conclusion” lặp lại Overview. LR 6: “highest number” dùng sai cho %. GRA 6: chủ yếu câu đơn/ghép; lỗi “It increase”.
Band 7.0 · C1

The line graph compares the proportion of people using the Internet in three countries, A, B and C, between 2000 and 2020.

Overall, Internet usage grew significantly in Country A, which had the highest figure by the end of the period, whereas it fell in Country B. Country C saw only a small change.

In 2000, only 20% of the population in Country A used the Internet, the lowest figure among the three countries. This figure doubled to 40% in 2010 and then rose sharply to 70% in 2020, overtaking both B and C.

By contrast, Country B started with the highest proportion, at 60%. However, this declined slightly to 55% in 2010 before dropping more noticeably to 40% in 2020. As for Country C, the percentage increased from 30% to 35% in the first ten years and then remained stable until 2020, so it was slightly lower than that of Country B at the end of the period.

≈ 165 words
TA 7: Overview rõ, đủ 3 nước, có điểm vượt. CC 7: chia đoạn theo xu hướng. LR 7: doubled, overtaking, noticeably. GRA 7: mệnh đề quan hệ, phân từ; gần như không lỗi.
Band 8.0 · C1

The line graph compares the percentage of people using the Internet in three countries, A, B and C, between 2000 and 2020.

Overall, Internet usage rose sharply in Country A, which overtook the other two countries to record the highest figure by the end of the period. By contrast, the proportion in Country B declined, while Country C saw only modest growth.

In 2000, only 20% of people in Country A used the Internet, the lowest figure of the three. This proportion doubled to 40% over the following decade before climbing steeply to 70% in 2020, making Country A the clear leader.

Country B, by contrast, started with the highest rate, at 60%, but the figure fell slightly to 55% in 2010 and then more noticeably to 40% by 2020, an overall drop of 20 percentage points. Meanwhile, Internet usage in Country C rose marginally from 30% to 35% during the first decade and remained at that level for the rest of the period, leaving it just below the figure for Country B.

≈ 185 words
Band 9.0 · C2

The line graph charts the proportion of the population using the Internet in three countries, labelled A, B and C, over the two decades from 2000 to 2020.

Overall, the three countries followed strikingly different paths: usage in Country A soared, propelling it from last to first place, while the rate in Country B, initially the highest, contracted steadily. Country C, meanwhile, changed only marginally.

At the start of the period, a mere fifth of people in Country A were online, the smallest share of the three. This figure doubled over the next ten years and then accelerated further, reaching 70% in 2020 – a 50-percentage-point gain overall and well ahead of either rival.

Country B presented the opposite picture. Having begun at 60%, three times the figure for Country A, its usage rate slipped to 55% by 2010 and then fell more sharply to 40%. Country C, by comparison, saw a modest rise from 30% to 35% in the first decade, after which it plateaued, ending the period just five points behind Country B.

≈ 175 words
TA 9: chọn lọc tinh tế (từ cuối lên đầu, so sánh gấp 3, khoảng cách 5 điểm). LR 9: propelling, contracted, plateaued. GRA 9: having begun…, after which…, không lỗi.

Dữ liệu biên soạn cho mục đích luyện tập · Illustrative data for practice.

Luyện tập & Chấm điểm · Practice and scoring

30 câu trong 4 phần. Chọn đáp án rồi bấm Nộp bài để chấm tự động.
30 questions in 4 parts, auto-marked.

10 Outline luyện viết · 10 practice outlines

Mỗi đề có biểu đồ, phân tích WHAT – WHERE – WHEN, key features, Overview, Body 1 / Body 2 và ngôn ngữ gợi ý. Học viên viết bài 20 phút ngay bên dưới.
Each outline: chart, task analysis, key features, paragraph plan and useful language. Write your essay below in 20 minutes.

WHAT WHERE WHEN · Từ dễ → khó (B1 → C1). Số liệu được biên soạn cho mục đích luyện tập.

Bài tập về nhà · Homework

  1. Học thuộc Language bank (tab Từ vựng) – viết mỗi động từ thành 2 câu: Verb + adverb và There was + adj + noun.
  2. Làm tab Luyện tập đến khi đạt ≥ 27/30.
  3. Viết đủ 4 đoạn cho Outline 1–5 (tuần 1) và Outline 6–10 (tuần 2), mỗi bài ≤ 20 phút, 160–190 từ.
  4. Mỗi bài dùng ít nhất 5 trong 10 cấu trúc và gạch chân chúng.
  5. Tự chấm bằng checklist bên dưới, sau đó bấm 📊 Chấm & chữa bài trong tab Outline (mật khẩu do giáo viên cung cấp) và sửa bài theo gợi ý nâng band.

Quy trình 20 phút · 20-minute plan

Thời gianViệc cần làm
0–3 phútT-O-G-D: nhận diện biến thể, thì, đặc điểm chính
3–5 phútChia Body, khoanh số liệu đầu – cuối – đỉnh – đáy – điểm giao
5–17 phútViết 4 đoạn
17–20 phútSoát số liệu, đơn vị, thì, chia động từ, đếm từ

Checklist tự chấm · Self-check